The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a fresh take on the typical devotion.

I think the prayer might read better if it was divided into stanzas; I felt with double spacing every line it gave me too much white space and distracted me a bit.

The idea of meditating and letting the light stay with you is a powerful way to worship God and come out of it feeling more refreshed.
Your tangible suggestion on how to relax while seeking to hear God's voice is so encouraging! I agree with Shann, this is a fresh take on a devotional. Also agree about the double spacing.:)
Good job on the subject but I agree with Shann. Other then that this was right on. Thank you for sharing and God bless.
07/17/10
Beautiful prayer lovely article. I have used the relaxation tecnique but you went the extra mile with it.! Good job. Blessings, Ruth
07/19/10
This would be nice to hear on a relaxation tape. Nice words, nice job.
07/19/10
I re-read the prayer and it's a little confusing to me. I want to read it as a prayer, but it's Jesus talking right? It feels more like a love letter from Him. Thank you
Good message, though I didn't think the beginning was a prayer either. Nicely done.