The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice - I liked your vivid imagary. My favorite line was the one about how as the heroine gained her physical sight, she lost her internal sight. Good writing!
Very well written - I love the dichotomy of losing and gaining sight. Very nicely done.
What a beautiful tender article. I enjoyed this very much. Thank you for sharing and God bless.
I found it interesting that in gaining her sight, she lost much of what was important to her. There's a great lesson here. So often people tend to say, "If I could only do (or be) this ... I could accomplish such and such." But when "this" comes, we find that it doesn't get us any closer to being who we want to be. The only thing that can accomplish that is God's prescense in our life, and that's how you ended your story. Great job!