The Official Writing Challenge
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06/17/10
Oh, I can so relate to your words! I too, struggle with the responsibilities of home and family, but have all these "words spinnin' around in my head." I really like your conclusion, too. Often, for me, it is not until I have prayed about what I am to write, as well as the proper timing to do the writing, that the words come in a peaceable way. Good job!
06/20/10
Extremely creative writing. I found it very interesting as to the route to get one's priorities right. Good advice to follow here for a busy housewife (I'm just a fellow).

Colin
You definitely described many of the challenges that I face. It was a fun poem to read. I could picture a head with all different words spinning around and bumping into each other.
On topic about a subject I know well. This was fun to read.
06/21/10
The words to spin, don't they? Nice job on this poem, describing the challenge--and the solution--well.
06/23/10
Nice poem, and so true--life itself can be a real challenge for a writer. Good job!
Congratulations on placing in the top 6 of your level.