The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/05
Good job writing in a teenager's authentic voice. Work on knowin when to use "Brandy and me" and when to use "Brandy and I"; there were a few times where it was incorrect. Good story; I wish we had more teens like Nora!
09/13/05
You wrote with so much emotion. I really enjoyed this piece!
09/21/05
Vera, this was a lovely story. I wanted to let you know that you made it into the semi-finals for the Bon Voyage challenge - so be encouraged! You did very well. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)