The Official Writing Challenge
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what a wonderful story. I loved it! Well written.
09/12/05
I loved this story! Very endearing... Made me giggle!!
Great story!
09/12/05
Your story pulled my heart strings. So very sweet!
09/13/05
Very tender and well-written.
09/13/05
You captured the boy's thoughts so well! Very cute!!
Have you ever been a five year old boy before?!? Your writing sounds like it! I can relate well to this story: my son's name is Jonathan, he's a picky eater, loved Spiderman at that age and is constantly bored - I have a younger brother named Billy too!
I enjoyed this entry. I like the way you captured the five-year old's thoughts and rebellious behaviour.
09/19/05
Way to go, Lisa! Congrats!!
Great story! Made me think of my two boys!
09/19/05
Congratulations! Many Blessings, Holly
09/21/05
Lisa, this was a very sweet story that made me think back to the old "Uncle Arthur" books I read when I was a kid. Congratulations on your 2nd place in the Level 2 awards. Love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
Great story, and congratulations!