The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow - what an intriguing thought and premise! Not sure I was completely following it all - but that very well may have been your point. I KNOW I will be back to read this one again. Thanks!
This is an interesting idea. A bit hard to follow, though. Perhaps putting the part she's reading in italics would help distinguish it from the action, even though there is overlap in the two. I can see this being part of a larger story. :-)
So "Alice in Wonderland." I loved it. Eugenie's circular experience was intriguing. The only place you lost me was when she started reading the first time. Maybe you could have indicated the shift with a colon or something similar.
I like the idea, I think, although I'm not sure I entirely followed it. I like the take on the build a bear stores, it's certainly a fresh idea. It would be great for the writer with writer's block. I respect you for running with your out of the box idea. All too often I find myself afraid to wander too far from the box. Good job it gave me a nice little chuckle.