The Official Writing Challenge
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Absolutely beautiful. Funny how we think we know what's best, but God is the true Editor of our lives.
Wonderful story and conclusion. Keep writing.
06/10/10
Very uplifting & an important reminder. Congratulations on your 1st place story Lisha!
This is outstanding a valuable lesson i too have learned over the years. it made me reflect on my own what-ifs. If an author can personalize a story that well, she has done an amazing job.

Just a quick editing note- when you were talking about the extra camper being a bedroom for my siblings and I you used I instead of me. An easy trick is to take out the first set of people you wouldn't say it made a bedroom for I.

But even that little mistake couldn't take away what a wonderful job you did. I bet you'll be surprised when you are able to see how many lives this one little story touched, and how many people benefited from your wisdom.
06/10/10
Wow, this is so beautiful Lisha. What a deep, touching lesson for us all to learn. Congratulations on your EC!
Congratulations Lisha, 1st place!!! Awesome girl. Beautifully written and very moving. Well done.
I have added your writing to my favorites. I read it and have thought about it for several days since I read it. It really moved me, which tells me that it is wonderfully written!
06/19/10
Absolutely amazing truth written here! So deserving of 1st place! Congratulations!