The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved the atmosphere you created. I'm a sucker for this style anyway.Good job.
This is very nice. Humorous. I liked it. Thanks.
Hey - I really really like this entry... IMHO I think it's a winner. Nicely done.
This is just "all around" good and poetically charming!
Well done. I loved the wayward muse. Very inspiring.
I have a hard time staying focused with poetry pieces, but I absolutely loved this one. It held my interest and I enjoyed the repeating pattern. Well done!
Are you sure you belong in this level?
Did you forget to click on masters?
Wonderful -a brilliant poem. Congratulations on your win.
Congratulations on your win Charldene. This is clever and fun - a delightful read!
This is WONDERFUL. That first stanza especially made me laugh out loud. Congratulations on second place overall :)
Congratulations on your EC! Great job using rhymes to add humor to your poem! Wonderful creativity!
Wonderful Charldene! Loved reading this fantastic poem. Congratulations on your level win and Editor's Choice!
Very nicely written. Congratulations!
Wow, this is so great and funny. I can't stop smiling. Congratulations on your EC!
A second place EC when entering at an intermediate level! Congratulations!!!! This deserves it!
I'm trying to catch up on my FW reading--and this was definitely worth reading. Your writing surpasses this level. I'm clapping for you in your EC and level placements with this fun and entertaining poem--Congratulations!
Congratulations on doing so well with your poem. One of the great features of FaithWriters is Jan's Writing Class which can be found by clicking on the Forums at the top of this page. Jan is currently looking at poetry construction and I'm sure you'll find what she has to say most helpful.