The Official Writing Challenge
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Enjoyed your uninhibited honesty about some of the realities of "life", of which I have partaken also. Your phrase: for the next is one of faith beyond my vision.is beautiful!
I enjoyed your reality check and all the problems that went with it. How well I remember. Good job.
06/01/10
This is delightful. It reads almost like a poem, with some really deep thoughts. My only "red ink" is that the topic is hinted at, but not so clearly seen in your piece.
06/01/10
As a mother, I can relate... life gets messy, even with just ONE small boy! Thanks for the reminder about the things that are most important.
Reality shows aren't the reality; this is. And I loved your honesty. Well done!
I like the way you show chaos changing over to peaceful living as Christ enters the picture. I like all the detail and the healthy dose of reality shown. A little red ink - breathe is a verb, breath is a noun. Very nice work.
06/02/10
I enjoyed this piece and liked the way it flowed. It was prose but had a poetic feel to it. Great message and reminder about what really matters.