The Official Writing Challenge
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Cute, cute, cute. This was a fun read.
05/20/10
This was a lot of fun. I liked your characters' names and the interactions between them. I felt that there was probably something that I was missing, like why Obsidian was in trouble and what the fairies' role was exactly - literal guardians or characters in her story writing.
Loved the little fairies munching there breakfasts! I could actually imagine it!!

Love how you are awakening the imagination in all of us! :)
This was an easy story to picture. And I like how you connected it to the writer's life. Writers are nuts, at least compared to other people. ;)