The Official Writing Challenge
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05/20/10
This is such a sweet compliment to your wife. Sounds like you're very blessed.
Thank you for a loving tribute to your wife who has inspired your so much.
05/20/10
I love how you used your writing abiliy to honor your wife. Very inspiring!
I loved the title and the poem. I love how you paid tribute to your precious wife. Well written.
Making words "sing", love it! This was fun to read and I felt blessed reading the wonderful tribute you paid to your wife.
05/20/10
Thanks for such a positive, affirming poem. You made a couple of typos in your fifth verse - should have read where and God's. But I'm confident that if you keep on competing and keep on learning, your abilities will grow and grow. God bless.
05/22/10
An original take on the topic, and one that warms my heart. Good job!
05/23/10
Liked the title and would have liked more content concerning David. Word choice made flow very difficult, keep practicing and it will get better.
05/23/10
Awww, what a sweet poem! :) I think the words flow well through this piece, telling a lovely story and "singing" of your love for writing and for your wife.

Nice job! ;)