The Official Writing Challenge
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What a story. This was on point and I was pulled into the story. You did a fantastic job. I enjoyed this very much.
Whoa and goosebumps and joy! Loved this and lived it with Sarah Anne. Well written and such a "feel good" story! Great Job.
05/07/10
What a life-changer that MS was!

Some of your longer paragraphs contain the dialog of two characters, and should be broken into shorter paragraphs.

This is well done, with a nice ending.
How nice. I enjoyed reading this story.