The Official Writing Challenge
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In my opinion you did an outstanding job staying on point. I truly enjoyed reading your story. It held my attention from beginning to end. Keep writing and God bless.
Was wrapped up and immersed in your setting and wonderful relationship with your Grandpa. The "Gram" threw me off a bit as I associate it with a Grandma but the story and your dialogue is great.
05/07/10
What a lovely relationship you've portrayed between these two characters!
05/10/10
Was engrossed. Nicely done