The Official Writing Challenge
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This was so cute and I love your reference to the worlds greatest manuscript ever written. Sounds like me when I put something down. Can't remember where, but God knows. Thank you for sharing and keep writing.
I loved the interplay between your three characters. I especially liked when the book ended up in the fridge after all. I wasn't expecting that. Good job!
I feel like Ellen on American Idol but again....awesome and fun! Loved your phrase: blue eyes curious. P.S...working on your next chapter :)
05/07/10
This will definitely appeal to teens, and to lovers of fantasy.

I was a bit confused by the characters; took me a while to figure out who was who, and I'm still not sure WHAT they were, or what their relationships were. And who's Amber?

All that aside--this is written in a charming style, and your writing is delightful.