The Official Writing Challenge
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A real tear-jerker, and very timely. Thank you! Please put an extra "enter" between paragraphs for an easier read.
Author's note:
Once again an apology to my readers for not having that extra space between paragraphs, but rejoice! For behold, my next piece, which I submitted just today, has those beloved extra spaces.
Thanks for your patience, and God bless,

This was wonderfully written even though sad.
Well written. Just tighten up the first paragraph and remove the was's.
Heartbreaking. Well done.
Held me captive from beginning to end. Disturbing and sad, but very well written! :)
You DO HAVE TALENT! Such a vivid description, such a heartfelt story, and such a CRY FOR PEACE! Being was another reason why we must live peacefully with our neighbors - but prophecy tells us differently. Keep writing, my friend!