The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/05
A real tear-jerker, and very timely. Thank you! Please put an extra "enter" between paragraphs for an easier read.
Author's note:
Once again an apology to my readers for not having that extra space between paragraphs, but rejoice! For behold, my next piece, which I submitted just today, has those beloved extra spaces.
Thanks for your patience, and God bless,

Kevin
09/14/05
This was wonderfully written even though sad.
09/14/05
Well written. Just tighten up the first paragraph and remove the was's.
Heartbreaking. Well done.
10/24/05
Held me captive from beginning to end. Disturbing and sad, but very well written! :)
11/24/05
You DO HAVE TALENT! Such a vivid description, such a heartfelt story, and such a CRY FOR PEACE! Being anti=war...it was another reason why we must live peacefully with our neighbors - but prophecy tells us differently. Keep writing, my friend!