The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed your take on this weeks challange. I usually have lots of thoughts running around in my head. Good job. Keep writing.
This is definitely an out of the box idea! I enjoyed your unique take on the topic.
05/03/10
I LOVE this allegory!

It's a little bit rough around the edges--would love to see it polished up--but this is exceedingly clever!
05/05/10
To be truthful and honest, I didn't get the point, nor did I find this week's topic in the story. However, I could be dense and it was way over my head, or I could be a "Ditto" to Nadine and need a shrink. (*.*) Anyway, Your punctuation, spelling, paragraphing, and writing all seemed to be AOK, it was just the content that seemed puzzling (to me)and to be somewhere out in left field. But who am I? Just an intermediate writer that happens to be out of my league in "Advanced"...go figure. But keep on writing, never give up!