The Official Writing Challenge
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*laughs* I hate being told to write things that are unexpected. It gives me writers block. I didn't expect your ending however, which is a point in your favor. Keep up the good work. :)
I enjoyed how you handled this weeks challange. I ask my friend what she thinks and like you develop writers block. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.
I had a nice hearty laugh at the end. It felt good. My minor suggestion would be with the word count limit, you had a lot of characters, maybe you could have developed them more if you only had two or three. I longed to know more about each one, Their names were intriguing. Good job.
Entertaining as always and you have so got your dialogue down!
05/02/10
I loved this! Funny stuff!
05/03/10
Who would guess it would be so hard, yet so much fun, starting a story. This is a fun read. Good job.
05/03/10
Ooooh, this is good!
This is very good! I had a gooood laugh. Unexpected beginnings...I like that. Thanks for sharing.