The Official Writing Challenge
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This was very interesting and I agree whole heartedly with this story. God does what God does best. When He is ready for us to move than so be it. All in God's time. Keep writing.
I enjoyed how you've been inspired by other writers. Your last paragraph felt a little disjointed, but I could see you expanding on it and coming up with a terrific testimonial or devotion. Keep writing and never give up on your dreams!
Great testimony and a lot of knowledge packed into this!
05/03/10
This is well-crafted!

Just the same, it felt a little bit cool--would have liked to see more of your own personality shine through.

Have you been to the forums on this site? There's a thread there with lessons for beginning and intermediate writers. I'd love to have your input there--your writing is very strong.