The Official Writing Challenge
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04/29/10
This was very interesting and I agree whole heartedly with this story. God does what God does best. When He is ready for us to move than so be it. All in God's time. Keep writing.
04/29/10
I enjoyed how you've been inspired by other writers. Your last paragraph felt a little disjointed, but I could see you expanding on it and coming up with a terrific testimonial or devotion. Keep writing and never give up on your dreams!
05/01/10
Great testimony and a lot of knowledge packed into this!
05/03/10
This is well-crafted!

Just the same, it felt a little bit cool--would have liked to see more of your own personality shine through.

Have you been to the forums on this site? There's a thread there with lessons for beginning and intermediate writers. I'd love to have your input there--your writing is very strong.