The Official Writing Challenge
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09/12/05
Beautiful prose that sounds and reads like poetry. I love it.
09/12/05
Wonderful thoughts: I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
Really enjoyed reading this. It flowed and moved so smoothly. Great work!
I like the blend of natural description as it communicates the language of the Creator. This is good!
09/13/05
though,could it be of jealousy- Excellent line! A poetically beautiful piece.
09/13/05
"cool night's breeze" and "moon's silvery glow" both need apostrophes. Lovely, lyrical prose, beautifully written.
09/13/05
This IS poetry. It's very wordy, which makes it hard for the untrained eye to follow when reading. Nice wordwork though.
Good imagery-keep working on the flow.