The Official Writing Challenge
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09/05/05
"Brilliant!" What a talented writer you are!
"Bravo!"
09/07/05
Great theme here! Good job!
09/07/05
Good use of repetition in this free-verse poem. Nicely done.
Well done! Very enjoyable. Thanks for sharing.
09/09/05
Nice thought--What would our picture postcard from Heaven look like? Reading that last verse makes me want to shut my eyes and picture how it will be.
09/10/05
A very nice poem -well done