The Official Writing Challenge
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04/22/10
Very good. It builds well and was easy to read.
04/23/10
Unaware to who? To you? ^^
It's good, simple and good.
Thank you for a heartwaring story. I enjoyed this immensely. Thank you again for such a tender story of Gods love and yes sometimes we do encounter angel unaware.
Your story is moving and beautiful. I almost wish the reader wasn't an angel, but an actual Christian going where God leads him. I had tears in my eyes. You did such a wonderful job in pulling the reader into your story.
Congratulations in placing in the top 40 over-all as well as 2nd in your level. Good job!
04/30/10
Your writing pulled me into the MC's situation and was not surprised that God provided an angel when she needed him most. Great job and a well deserved win.