The Official Writing Challenge
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". . .plans to prosper you and not to harm you, plans to bring you a future and a hope." You ended with the beginning of one of my favorite Scripture verses. :)

I like how you dug into the mind of Jeremiah's secretary and told the story from his point of view. It kind of has a "knights of the round table" feel to it, only in a Biblical setting. Lovers of ancient literature will especially love this piece.
An interesting POV. You brought the story to life with your details. How wonderful that the word of God was written for so many people to hear.
I loved how you wrote this story through his secretaries eyes. Very well written. Thank you for sharing such a moving story of Gods power.
I felt like I was "watching" a movie! This is so well told.

I felt as though you were describing MY grief at the rebellion of those around me in this age.

Well written, engaging and loved the POV from Baruch.