The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a pleasurable walk back into time and informative as well.
That was an exciting moment in history and you did a great job retelling it.
03/21/10
Well done--I remember those dates, too, and I love the point you made at the end.
03/24/10
Not getting the "wow" here. If it was a "wow" event then you should say so. Someone reading this under 30 would not see it as so. Maybe landing on Venus might be a "wow" today. Overall writing was good.
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