The Official Writing Challenge
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09/05/05
This is a wonderful article. The inner dialogue is excellent. Well done.
09/05/05
Good article! This could be the start of a book on forgiveness.
09/05/05
I used to work in a nursing home and your descriptions and thoughts could have been my own. But the surprise twist at the end really caught me! Excellent!
09/07/05
This story flows well, with a good balance of dialogue and action. Your descriptions are very realistic, too. Great job!
09/07/05
Lovely, very well-written. Consider moving up a level; this is very good.
09/07/05
I enjoyed reading the story. I didn't expect the two to know each other. Nice job..
09/09/05
Very enjoyable and you kept the best to last! Well done.
09/09/05
Never woulda saw that one coming! Thanks for sharing! Well done!
09/09/05
EXCELLENT! Wonderful story. Turn it into a longer story. Great!
09/10/05
That was really great! Looking back, I might have changed the title, for less forshadowing.
09/11/05
Great story about how wonderfully God orders our footsteps.