The Official Writing Challenge
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09/05/05
This is a wonderful article. The inner dialogue is excellent. Well done.
Good article! This could be the start of a book on forgiveness.
09/05/05
I used to work in a nursing home and your descriptions and thoughts could have been my own. But the surprise twist at the end really caught me! Excellent!
09/07/05
This story flows well, with a good balance of dialogue and action. Your descriptions are very realistic, too. Great job!
09/07/05
Lovely, very well-written. Consider moving up a level; this is very good.
I enjoyed reading the story. I didn't expect the two to know each other. Nice job..
Very enjoyable and you kept the best to last! Well done.
Never woulda saw that one coming! Thanks for sharing! Well done!
09/09/05
EXCELLENT! Wonderful story. Turn it into a longer story. Great!
09/10/05
That was really great! Looking back, I might have changed the title, for less forshadowing.
09/11/05
Great story about how wonderfully God orders our footsteps.