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Precious event, fun read and I liked how it flowed, bringing the reader to the ultimate birth!
The miracle of a child born and learning new things is definitely a "wow!" Especially the birth of our Lord Jesus. I find it awe-inspiring that He would give up His throne in Heaven to come to earth for us. This is a truly beautiful poem. Loved it!
I love your title and enjoyed the flow and rhyme. Watching infants grow the first year is definately amazing! Great job tying in the perfect baby/child - Jesus.
This is beautiful and flows so easily.
As the grandma of a precious baby not much older than this, I enjoyed the imagery here--babies are so miraculous, the way they learn something new every day.

Some of your rhymes seemed a bit forced to me.

I love the way you brought this around to the Christ Child at the end. Nice.
I enjoyed your poem. Good job. Praise God for blessing us with babies.
A cute poem, keep writing.
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