The Official Writing Challenge
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09/05/05
I loved the dialogue. It read smoothly and great ending!
09/05/05
Very good story! Great dialogue! Kept me intrigued until the end...
09/07/05
Your dialog rings true, and your characters have distinct personalities. If you add some action to occasional lines of dialog, especially at the beginning, it will make it easier for your reader to follow. Very sweet story!
09/07/05
Ooooh, good story. Creative take on the topic!
Very sweet story...I liked the characters. Nice job.
I'm a little puzzled. How did the old lady know your name? Otherwise this was a very creative piece that was enjoyable to read. Thanks for sharing.
I agree! This is a very creative take on the subject! Would like to see more! Thanks for sharing!
09/10/05
What a neat story -I liked it a lot
09/11/05
I like this....a very good story.
A well deserved win..
09/12/05
Excellent dialogue, especially Jerry's 'bystander who knows all' POV. Well done.

God Bless, Karen
09/12/05
Congratulations! Well done. Keep on writing!
09/12/05
Great work. I am thrilled to see your name in the winner's circle. You have been a great encouragement to so many!
09/20/05
Shannon, I was actually judging during the week of the Postcards Challenge, although not for Level 2. When this entry came through in the Semi-finals, I just wrote one thing in the comments space on my rating sheet - "I LIKE IT!" You are writing very well and it's exciting to see you go from strength to strength. And it's great to see you've moved up to Level 3! With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)

What excellent twists! Look forward to reading more from you. Congratulations. =)
11/27/05
I'm with J. Jones - How did she know your name? Besides that, however, I think it was great! Hard subject to grapple with..Post Cards, but Congratulations! New comer reads old stories...smile.