The Official Writing Challenge
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03/05/10
Story poems are so much fun to read!

Rhyming poetry like this usual flows better when the meter is more consistent--the same pattern of stressed and unstressed syllables in each stanza. This one felt a bit bumpy to me.

Love the title, and the action of the story.
03/05/10

Oh, I liked this one! I could easily see this as a children's storybook, with all the action scenes on each page along with the corresponding stanzas.
03/07/10
Perfect for kids delight. Not too smooth a rhyming pattern...but kids wouldn't know the difference.
03/09/10
A fun read. I'm sure kids would enjoy it. I did.
This is hysterical. I laughed throughout. Now I have one more reason to want to see Alaska, to visit the town of Eek. It takes great talent to come up with something like that. Good job.