The Official Writing Challenge
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03/04/10
A fun creative use of eek. Poor mortimor mouse.
03/05/10
Cute personality on your little fellow.

I think you were looking for 'samurai' toward the end there--and if you ever seek publication (as a children's book, perhaps?), you may have to change the mouse's name; Disney may have rights to Mortimer.

I'd have liked more of this--it was great fun!
03/06/10
Fun piece and well-written! Living in the country as I do, in a 160 yr old house, I have met plenty of Mortimer's relatives - can't quite summon up the sympathy for him and his ilk!
This is fantastic. I really loved it.
03/11/10
Yay, Marijo!
Congratulations on 3rd place!
You're moving up.
03/11/10
Congratulations! Good job! Moving on up!
03/12/10
Congratulations girl, you nailed it! Great job, and you were a bit discouraged! Never give up! Proud of you!