The Official Writing Challenge
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09/05/05
Creative idea and well written. I enjoyed reading this very much! "God Bless You"
09/05/05
I liked this poem. Good work.
09/07/05
A lovely message, and I liked the way you compared Jesus' postcards to the kind we often get in the mail. Work on meter (the same number of accented and unaccented syllables in each line) and you'll have a great poem here!
09/07/05
Really great idea! A little bit of polishing will help the flow - this piece has brilliant potential.
I agree with Anita! This piece definitely has potential. I'd encourage you to keep on writing - there were some great ideas here.
09/10/05
This was very well done - a great message.
I liked your poem. It made me smile and think, I'd like to get a postcard from Him too.