The Official Writing Challenge
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03/04/10
A good way to use eek. It is quite scary to think of people being without God and denying Him.
03/05/10
We don't see enough internal rhyme here in the Writing Challenge--well done!
I really enjoyed your rhyming pattern. it takes talent to do that. Your words touched my heart- a great message throughout.
03/09/10
Defintely a poem with some very good points within. Not the smoothest poem I've ever read...but has such a good message that the lack of a perfect rhythmic beat can be overlooked. Nice job.