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Jesus! The great Liberator!
Nice job of drawing the reader in at the very start of the story. You made us care about Harry.
GREAT last line - Let freedom reign by letting Jesus reign. it would have been even better if you had written the whole thing in past tense.
I am so sorry about the loss of your friend, Harry. He sounded like a wonderful human being. His memory lingers on in your heart and in your writing. God bless you.
While, this was a sad article in the loss of a friend, it was very nicely told and written. Thanks for sharing.