The Official Writing Challenge
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Very convicting to me - I am a homeschooling mother of 4 and my days are endless loops of the same song, too. I often feel as though I am missing something, and I think you touched on what that thing is. Good writing.
This is a very powerful piece. You've written a winner in my book!
I love seeing how much you have blossomed as a writer! This piece spoke to my heart. I laughed out loud about the dusting line. Well-written and you made an excellent point.
I loved this. The record analogy used throughout the piece worked incredibly well. I laughed in the beginning, and several times was startled by the powerful ways you used analogy to get various points across. Plus, I was personally reminded that I need to set aside more time for listening -- me and God.
Beautiful--marvelous pacing and imagery.
Your word phrasing/choice and imagery is wonderful. Your message beautiful. Great job.
Excellent job crafting this piece!
Amid the chores is the time we need to listen, not to ourselves, but to God our Savior. You have written well and the message gets across nicely.
Beautiful, devotional thoughts! I especially like this, "I whisper as the turn table slows and the notes domino into a slow motion collision of silence." Great message!