The Official Writing Challenge
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Your title grabbed me to read your article, first!

Great analogy with your garden. I was very touched.
02/27/10
I like the comparison of you choosing to care for your garden and your heavenly Father as the master gardener caring for your soul. The title does make you wonder what you've written.
03/03/10
Awesome title that really grabbed my attention.

Two suggestions: avoid the use of exclamation points in narrative; they're best reserved for dialog. And be careful of comma splices and run-on sentences.

Your passion for your garden really shines through in this pleasant narrative.