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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Postcards (08/29/05)

TITLE: You Are Loved
By Debra Bowers
09/02/05


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Pretty little postcard
Placed upon a stand
Pretty little postcard
Waiting for a hand

Lovely picture on one side
A panoramic view
Of birds that glide, above the tide
An ocean cobalt blue

It’s purpose is to bring a smile
To please and catch another’s eye
And for a moment… little while
Say “Hello” or maybe “Hi”

Some might think this isn’t much
To get one in the mail
A brief review, a tale, or such
Of car trip, boat, or rail

But in each word of, “Wish you were here”
“The sky is s blue, the water crystal clear
Sincere the wish that you were near
And in a heart, are held most dear

So next time, one might come to you
Smile and know your loved
And in each single word you view
The comfort, your thought of


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Bethany Payne09/06/05
Nice poem - good flow! Could use some punctuation, but it is sweet.
Jan Ackerson 09/07/05
A bit of editing is all this poem needs--spelling and punctuation errors should be cleaned up, and it will be a delightful verse.
Anita Neuman09/07/05
Beautiful poetry. Well done.
Peggy Yengling09/08/05
Such a lovely poem with a very special message: Being in someone's thoughts and feeling loved is the BEST gift of all! Thank you for this beautiful reminder. God bless you!
Julianne Jones09/09/05
It is special when someone thinks to send us a postcard. Thanks for reminding us so nicely in verse.
Brandi Roberts09/09/05
LOL No one noticed your word that was missing. It's a very sweet poem. Thanks for sharing!
Shari Armstrong 09/09/05
A nice poem
Tammy Hamrick09/09/05
It's all been said. Still liked the poem though.