The Official Writing Challenge
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09/06/05
Nice poem - good flow! Could use some punctuation, but it is sweet.
09/07/05
A bit of editing is all this poem needs--spelling and punctuation errors should be cleaned up, and it will be a delightful verse.
09/07/05
Beautiful poetry. Well done.
Such a lovely poem with a very special message: Being in someone's thoughts and feeling loved is the BEST gift of all! Thank you for this beautiful reminder. God bless you!
It is special when someone thinks to send us a postcard. Thanks for reminding us so nicely in verse.
LOL No one noticed your word that was missing. It's a very sweet poem. Thanks for sharing!
09/09/05
A nice poem
09/09/05
It's all been said. Still liked the poem though.