The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! I didn't see that ending coming. I enjoyed this and could easily relate to the young mother in the beginning of the story. Keep it up!
I loved how this story switched from the motherly instincts and sense of loss, to the daughter's care for the mother as a surprise at the end. Awesome insight. Thanks.
Wow, totally awesome story and what a surprise ending. So creative too. Loved it.
Wow. What a twist.I thought it was a distraught mother.You did a great job of holding my attention. Sad ending.
I have to concur with the other comments and say Wow! This story really held my interest and the twist at the end was very surprising. Great writing.
A "Blue Ribbon" story here! Absolutely brilliant for the Topic this week, and also a writer that can move the reader to tears! Wow! Instead of a dozen roses, I'm sending you a dozen "Kudos" for this one. Super!
WOW! This was amazing and the surprise ending was the icing on the cake. Great job. Keep writing.
Nice job, the twist was excellent.
Good job with the stream of consciousness--that's not often seen in the challenge.