The Official Writing Challenge
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A good reminder/devotional - I enjoyed it. You have a nice writing style - descriptive, flowing, and easy to follow. You made me want to continue reading.
Great thoughts here about watching what we say. It doesn't matter if we have had a bad day, we need to be kind and let God help us. Thanks for reminding us to be kind and watch what we say.
Thank you for the poweful reminder to harness our tongues. They can ignite the fires of hell if not held in check. I enjoyed this very much.
Good job!
An important lesson for us all!

I'd have loved for you to develop the "bad hair" analogy ever further--to use an actual time when you experienced one (perhaps even with a humorous touch) to connect with the points you were making.

Nicely written.