The Official Writing Challenge
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02/18/10
I am with you. This has been a long winter. I enjoyed your poem and use of Phew!!
I can definitely appreciate your poem. It seems like there is so much snow everywhere. You did a nice fun job. Keep it up.
This was truly enjoyable. Keep writing and your poetry is wonderful. I agree about Springs arrival.
So enjoyed this poem. I can relate to it so well. And a wonderful rythm and flow.
02/24/10
HaHa! Great story and rhyming! I love the light-hearted frustration. How nice of the MC to help out his neighbor even though he HATES shoveling snow. :) I completely agree with the end. May spring come soon!
02/25/10
Great poem, lovely rhymes. Congrats on your win.
02/25/10
I can relate from a couple years back in eastern WA. We would shovel off our driveway and wake up to two-three foot snow drifts. Great rhyming...thank God for Spring!