The Official Writing Challenge
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02/18/10
Sometimes people are so condemning.It's good to know Christ has forgiven us and we should also forgive others.
It's wonderful to be forgiven. I was aching to learn more about your MC and her trials and struggles. This could be the start of a great devotion.
Thank you for sharing this story. It is sad but a lot of people judge a book by its cover and never truly look within. I thank Christ for loving us so much that no matter the situation He forgives and forgets. To bad we can't do likewise. Keep writing.
02/20/10
providing hope is what we are supposed to be doing. nice view of "church' from the hopeless side. i hope it becomes more prevalent.
02/20/10
This would be a great advertisement for a recovery group - so honest, so transparent. Glad your mc found a safe place. I enjoyed this a lot.
This was a great story. Like Shann, I think it could have been pulled out a little more to show us more of your MC. But overall, I think you really did a good job. I liked how it ended, too.
02/24/10
It warmed my heart to know that the church members in the story were genuine, loving followers of Christ. Just simple acceptance rather than judgement of those looking for a way to God may be all they need to encourage them to keep making their way towards the Way of Life. Good story.