The Official Writing Challenge
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Good story! Suspenseful!
Don't change a thing!
What a beautiful story of courage and love, and yes, even hope. Well written. Thanks for sharing.
I loved the intrigue here! Like a mini-spy novel. I was distracted by the German accent, though. If he was speaking heavily accented English, he'd probably say "Gott" instead of "God", for example, not just the "v" for "w" switch. And maybe not such perfect grammar? I'd love to read the sequel to this: does he reunite with his wife? Thanks for this captivating read.
GREAT JOB! A unique idea for this theme, and a well-written, captivating story.
I loved this one - I'd love to hear the rest of the story!!
A well deserved win. I would make your title just as intriguing as your story.
Thanks to all who left feedback on this story. It is greatly appreciated!