The Official Writing Challenge
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02/18/10
Wow! What imagination. Poor Marcus. Good job.
I loved this. It had me laughing at the referal of three blind doctors like three blind mice. This was well written. Thank you.
A nice twist to a nursery rhyme. It was funny. Good job.
02/19/10
nice job of taking science fiction and giving a new twist on an old fairy tale. got lost a couple of times, so you might want to work on your transitions. all the same: Good Job!
02/22/10
nice story :-) very good!
02/24/10
Whoa, cheese-disease-inducing planets, invisible rodents, and sneezing mice. Talk about creative! Why does it make me think of Looney Tunes and "Duck Dogers of the Twenty-fourth and a half CENTURY!" :D I think you should be a screenwriter for Saturday morning cartoons. ;) I had to laugh at the sentence "Drs. Bartholdy and Evans placed indiscretionary bets as to which organ would go next." What inconsiderate doctors! (But funny nontheless.)