The Official Writing Challenge
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Lovely thoughts here and they flowed really well. Loved the thought-provoking last line. What postcard are we going to send Him? Thanks for sharing.
09/07/05
Effective use of repetition...a thoughtful essay.
09/09/05
Some good thoughts here. Well done.
09/11/05
What a wonderful analogy, and so deeply truthful. Excellent essay!
09/11/05
I had never thought about every day like that before...thanks for the neat concept.