The Official Writing Challenge
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09/05/05
Great message - beauty for ashes, and hope that we can move on to better things...
09/07/05
I appreciate your honest reporting of your genuine feelings of anger and frustration. Work on more consistent tenses, and your piece will have a more polished feel. Unique perspective on this week's topic--thanks!
09/07/05
Great original idea, and a realistic portrayal.
Covered bridges? Sounds so romantic! What a loss for you and the community. Creative take on the topic. Felt there needed to be a stronger link between the opening paragraph and the one beginning "The flames were intense". At first I thought you were upset with your husband because he went out to fight the fire. Watch you tenses and this could be a really great piece!