The Official Writing Challenge
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I truly enjoyed your story about computers and all the other facinating gizmos of today. Times have changed but God is unchangeable of which I'm thankful. Thank you for the trip down memory lane. Keep writing and God bless.
My grandma had a wringer washer. It was such fun. Your story takes me back to simpler days.
I am a little confused with paragraph 4. It seems like some words are missing.
The rest of the story is delightful.
02/11/10
God is great and He certainly gave men great minds to think of all these new contraptions. My Mom had a wringer washer when I was a kid. I enjoyed your look back at life and how it used to be and how it is now. God is great. Thanks for sharing.
Loved the glimpse of a time when life was a little less complicated.
02/17/10
I know what you mean--sometimes I feel like I'll never catch up to technology.

I wonder if something went awry in your editing process in an early paragraph (3 or 4, I think)?

Great conclusion--and hang in there!