The Official Writing Challenge
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02/05/10
I think I would have focused more on Sheba and her difficulty of obeying than the humans trying to be trained. You did bring her in at the end, but I wanted more of her perspective before that to go with the title. Keep writing.
You did a great job! I could picture the entire scene. I did notice you used the word through instead of threw, but that is easily fixed. I enjoyed the story- it was a fun read!
02/07/10
Great ending and a lovable story line. We also have a dog that's fond of barking at visitors but in our case we encourage it. We have unwanted nighttime visitors probably about once a night and our little barker is a great deterrent!
02/07/10
Sheba can come to my house.
Darling story.