The Official Writing Challenge
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Very well written. Flowed easily and I was engaged the entire time!
You gave me a vivid picture. I was smiling and had snorts of laughter the whole way through it. Great job.
Great story. Apt descriptions - you describe the attitude of my Australian Shepard/German Shepard mix perfectly. :) Very nice take on the topic.
I nearly choked with laughter. I loved this very much. Kind of reminded me of my neighbors big black lab. Her name was Baby. Thank you and keep writing. God bless.
lol, this was so good! I was laughing the entire way through as you captured the "ol' dog's" personality to perfection! Great job
Great story. Well written with wonderful dialogue. You brought the scene to life. Good thing the cat came by.
You have a lot of great humor in this. What fun! I could see this being played out!
Great job here. I enjoyed the laugh.
Our Missy dog has similar traits so your descriptions were so clear to me. I loved the way you worked an "attack" into the tail... oops ... tale.
Wow. This is such a humourous story. Wonderful writing. God bless