The Official Writing Challenge
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02/04/05
Great poem. I suspect from the title you're writing from the perspective of a child. You've conveyed the emotions very well.
02/04/05
I love the verse in psalms that says, "Lord, shut my mouth!" Those words should always be swallowed until we can give them over to Him.

Nice job!
02/04/05
You are definitely in touch with the child's anger...so much so..should we back away from you too? :)