The Official Writing Challenge
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Great poem. I suspect from the title you're writing from the perspective of a child. You've conveyed the emotions very well.
I love the verse in psalms that says, "Lord, shut my mouth!" Those words should always be swallowed until we can give them over to Him.

Nice job!
You are definitely in touch with the child's much so..should we back away from you too? :)