The Official Writing Challenge
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A good rule of thumb: "RNR" "readers need relief". White space is critical. Determine where the paragraph breaks should occur, then double space between. White space tends to draw the reader, "cramming" has the opposite effect. Thankfully, someone gave me the same advice when I started.
I enjoyed reading this but next time break it down into paragraphs and space between them. It makes it easier to read and holds the readers attention. Keep writing and God bless.
02/01/10
An apt commentary on today's world...thanks for this thoughtful entry.
Good entry. It would be a little easier to read if you would separate the paragraphs.
02/03/10
PLEASE break down the article into clear paragraphs. The sheer volume of words can be intimidating unless broken into logical sections; sort of a "can't see the trees for the forest" thing.