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01/21/10
I loved the oops moment. It was so tender and sweet. God works in such wonderful ways to bring about the ending he chooses. Thank you for sharing such a lovely story. Keep writing and God bless.
01/21/10
Wonderfully told. I could'nt help but smile.
01/21/10
I loved this story, it made me laugh so hard. I loved the ooops moment.
01/22/10
Beautifully told and beautifully written, nice tribute to your parents.
01/24/10
Well done.This is a very sweet story and I like your description of the "Oops" moment.Lovely!
01/25/10
I enjoyed this piece. It's funny and flows well.
01/25/10
Awww... I love this story! And the fact that it's based on a true story made it that much sweeter. Excellent writing.
01/26/10
I enjoyed this story. Sweet and charming! It was written well. Thank you.

01/26/10
Very sweet!

My only suggestion would be a different title; the Shakespeare quote is so well-known that your readers might expect a Romeo-and-Juliet type story rather than this delightful young romance.

I've started a thread in the message boards specifically for Beginner and Intermediate writers, and I'd love to have you stop by. http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewforum.php?f=67

I enjoyed this very much!
01/27/10
What a beautiful love story. I had a hard time believing it was a true story, I thought wonderful romances such as theirs existed only in fairy tales. I enjoyed every word. I have goosebumps on my arms. Great job.
Shann
01/27/10
Finally my reaction before judging day!!! Thanks for telling my story so beautifully. It was one of the biggest oops moments of my life with a happy ending. Signed: 'The ADRIES' as we are commonly known since that time!!
01/28/10
loved it. Congrats on Placing!
01/28/10
Congratulations on your EC! And welcome to Faithwriters!
01/28/10
This is a beautiful little romance, very well-written.

I have to admit, however, that I passed this by at first due to the title. Needs a catchy one so others don't miss this gem. Patty
01/29/10
This is charming, sweet and extra special since it is a true story of romance. Congrats on your level win and EC placement.