The Official Writing Challenge
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What a heart warming story. If this is a true story it is amazing. Even if it is fiction you did a superb job. Keep writing and God bless.
01/21/10
I enjoyed reading this. It was a well-written piece. You have a few grammar issues such as "looser" should be "loser," and there are a few punctuation marks that aren't right, but other than that, it was great reading your article.
I enjoyed reading this.
01/22/10
Had a Forrest Gump feel to it. A few misplaced quote marks and not enough apostrophes. The end was a little disjointed but overall a good read.
01/22/10
A nice story. Some grammar and punctuation problems but overall a good job
01/26/10
I love the voice of this piece--innocent and authentic.
01/27/10
I could just see this story as it unfolded. Wonderful ending.