The Official Writing Challenge
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I like this! Add one letter and pain becomes wonderment. Nicely done devotional piece.
01/15/10
Really great message in your story! I totally 'get' the being motivated to serve by an 'ow' in our past. Your line about 'service is part of the healing" is very powerful and insightful.

Your first paragraph contains a rather lengthy sentence that might work better if broken up a bit.

Again, a strong message about how God heals and works in our lives-- Good Job!
I love this. It was very touching and only God can turn the ows of life into wows of life in heaven. Thank you for sharing.
01/18/10
Very well done!

The italics were a bit distracting, but I suspect that you just forgot to close them after the initial quote.

I've started a class in the FaithWriters forums for Beginner and Intermediate writers. I'd love to see you there--look for "Jan's Writing Basics".

Really good title.
01/23/10
Congratulations on taking 8th place in Level 2! You can view the highest rankings each week on the forums:

http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=28376
01/24/10
thanks for all the comments. Yes I forgot to close the italics--my notes on how to do it got displaced by the rearranging of the desk.